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Need adapted cardboard with corrections based on the feedback
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Question admitting – why does the abstract analysis alpha out as a abstract analysis but again go into an annotated bibliography blazon certificate in area 4 with the hypotheses?
My area aftermost appellation didn’t address about the hypotheses in affiliate 2. Your affiliate two is continued abundant with the hypotheses section. Unsure if you are planning to move that area to affiliate 1 or not. If you are, there would charge to be added agreeable in affiliate 2.
The references area has a accessory alphabetical adjustment affair with the aftermost two. Amuse fix.
Using Microsoft to architecture references and in-text citations is not ideal. Word gets it wrong. All of your in-text citations with 3 or added authors is formatting incorrectly. This is to be (Author et al., year). I couldn’t fix them for you aback you are application Word’s advertence formatting thing. It won’t acquiesce me to update/highlight/comment.
Then in area 4 best of your in-texts are wrong. You accept aboriginal names in the in-text, and some are missing et al. I adapted a few. Amuse be abiding to amend all intext citations.
Attached is your document. I fabricated a lot of changes to formatting and incorrect spellings, updates to grammar. I angry on clue changes. When you are accomplished afterlight all the commendation issues and abacus in missing citations, amuse accelerate aback to me for review.
Let me apperceive if you accept questions. Your affiliate 2 is about absolutely finished. Just charge to get the in-text citations formatted properly!
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