Example of Criticising a Translation
The antecedent accent argument (SLT) is a journalistic annual report. It attempts to acquaint the clairvoyant about a assertive event. On the alternative hand, The ambition accent argument (TLT) is weak, and it's accessible that the advice action has been done application a adaptation apparatus AL WAFI that upholds exact translation. The ambition accent argument (TLT) reads foreign. as able-bodied as, it's difficult to be understood, it does not breeze calmly and does not accept a accustomed feel due to the lexical, grammatical, and textual errors that are detected in the text. In the ambition accent argument (TLT), there are abounding lexical errors accept been detected.
First, the lexical annual in the aboriginal branch does not accumulate with back in the Arabic accent the chat collocates with, and the chat are acclimated to accumulate with kings and queens. There is addition lexical absurdity detected in the argument associated with equivalence. The lexical annual "concern" agency in Arabic, but in this context, it should accept been translated, while the adaptation apparatus annual AL WAFI has abandoned the ambience in which the lexical annual appears in and autonomous alone one acceptation for the lexical annual "situation". There are additionally grammatical errors that are detected in the text. The aboriginal absurdity associated with the chat adjustment in the aboriginal paragraph, area an binding anatomy about-face should accept been taken abode back in the Arabic accent we alpha the book with the verb, and the chat adjustment is (VSO) altered from the English language. So the translator apparatus should accept started with the verb, not with the subject. The additional grammatical absurdity is detected in the additional paragraph, the word. In the Arabic accent back we are talking about two bodies that means, but the translator abandoned this amount back in English there is no grammar abject alleged "dual", clashing the Arabic language. Therefore it should accept been translated in accordance with Arabic accent conventions. The third grammatical absurdity is detected in the additional paragraph. Back AL WAFI is advice word-for-word, it has abandoned the "duality" in Arabic accent and construe it according to what appears afore it in the ambience "they", but "they" in this ambience refers to the admiral and the king, that should accept been translated in accordance with the Arabic accent conventions.
The third blazon of errors detected is textual errors. the aboriginal absurdity is detected in the aboriginal branch and associated with its accessible in the English argument that "three canicule visit" is a appointment will abide for three days. But in Arabic, it should accept been absolute to accede with the Arabic language. The additional textual absurdity is detected in the additional paragraph. The translator apparatus has started the branch after actuality affiliated with the aboriginal paragraph, area it should accept been affiliated to the aboriginal one because of its a journalistic text. A adamant accessory charge booty abode in the antecedent of the branch to accomplish the argument apprehend added smoothly. In the Arabic language, there charge be added corruption that should booty abode to accomplish the texts consistently apprehend as accustomed texts and can be understandable.
Briefly, The ambition accent argument (TLT) is weak. a lot of errors detected in the translated text, and the adaptation apparatus autonomous the exact translation, abandoned the Arabic accent conventions. Therefore it reads like a adopted argument and does not breeze smoothly. There are several affairs that Charge be taken into annual to accomplish the argument has a accustomed feel'.
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